I thought you did a really good job with the video and you had some very good insight on how the video related to modernism and such. I do wish that you would have expanded on how his childhood was hard. You sort of just said he had a rough life and left it at that. Would have been interesting it you would have expanded on that. All in all a very good video and very informative.
The videos were all very short, but most of them got the job done. I liked your aspects of modernism but a few of the points were very vague, but the tie-in with WWI was very effective. Your synopsis of the stories were brief and to the point which helped the effectiveness of the videos and they were well done which helped. Using a few more sources wouldn't have hurt but you had a decent amount present. In summation they were all solid videos and got the point across very well.
I have to agree with the two previous posts. Your videos were very short, but they also were informative. It wasn't hard to watch, due to their shortness. A few of your ideas aren't really expanded on, which I think would have really made the video a lot better, but overall, very good analysis of modernism.
I thought you did a really good job with the video and you had some very good insight on how the video related to modernism and such. I do wish that you would have expanded on how his childhood was hard. You sort of just said he had a rough life and left it at that. Would have been interesting it you would have expanded on that. All in all a very good video and very informative.
ReplyDeleteThe videos were all very short, but most of them got the job done. I liked your aspects of modernism but a few of the points were very vague, but the tie-in with WWI was very effective. Your synopsis of the stories were brief and to the point which helped the effectiveness of the videos and they were well done which helped. Using a few more sources wouldn't have hurt but you had a decent amount present. In summation they were all solid videos and got the point across very well.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with the two previous posts. Your videos were very short, but they also were informative. It wasn't hard to watch, due to their shortness. A few of your ideas aren't really expanded on, which I think would have really made the video a lot better, but overall, very good analysis of modernism.
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